SARON ME AND CHRISTINE PT 4 by tomask

short, no plot, no lead in, nothing worth reading1/10

boo

You need to make it last a bit longer. Stretch it out, and talk describe the woman getting fucked a bit better. The love making when he is taking her in the ass as well. WOrk on it. 5/10

Too short, son. not too well writed, either. 3/10